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February 3
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Sometimes I wonder if for you I'd touch the sky.
I'd have to stretch, but I'd make it, I'd lift you up so high.
And sometimes I wish that would give me this one dance;
Send me into a vision, push me into a trance.

Sometimes I wonder if it's really worth it loving you.
You know that I've always said I'll do anything for you.
Well, maybe I can't make good on that promise, so in shame
I ask you, well, I've screwed up bad, so could we start again?

Jolts of creativity in my Technicolor dreams,
Tin men and painted scarecrows bursting at the seams;
Red kings and black queens, it's really all the same,
But right now I need a clean slate, so could we start again?
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Poem I found in my sta.sh archives. It seemed more or less complete, so I'm uploading it.
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Mood: Joy ~IttyBitty1996 Feb 3, 2013  Student Artist
It is a good one! ^.^
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*Paulwe Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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~IttyBitty1996 Feb 4, 2013  Student Artist
Your welcome! Sorry for not replying earlier, I had High School. O.O
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*Paulwe Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nah, it's fine. I know how it is, I'm in high school too.
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~IttyBitty1996 Feb 5, 2013  Student Artist
Really? :)
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*Paulwe Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yup. If you can believe this, I'm in Grade 8, it's just that I'm gifted, so yeah, I'm basically doing stuff at a higher grade level. That's why I can write so well.
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~IttyBitty1996 Feb 6, 2013  Student Artist
Wow! ^^ That's a great gift! ^^ And yes, I do believe you. :)
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